阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 PamBalesplannedasix-hourhikethroughNewHampshire^Mount.Onthedashboard(汽车仪表板)wasadetailedplanensuringshecouldreturnbeforethearrivalofsomeforecastedbadweather.Differentfromformerhike,though,thistime,shehadpackedforalmosteveryaccidentandintendedtowalkalone. Atabout8a.m.,she'dcheckedtheweatherforecast.Balesknewfromexperiencethatherhikewasrealistic.Besides,shehadtwoemergencyplansandextralayersofclothingtobetterprotecthercoretemperatureasconditionschanged. Balesfeltexcitedasshewalkedupintosnowypaths.Shewaswearingafleecetanktop(绒衣)andhikingpants,andnoglovesorhatbecausetheairwasmild.Thirtyminuteslater,sheclimbedintocolderairanddeepersnows.Shenowwasinaquarter-zipfleecetopandgloves.At10a.m.,theweatherwasshowingitsteeth.Balesaddedmorelayerstoresistcoldwindsanddensefog.Makingherwayacrossthesnow-coveredridge,shenoticedsomething:asinglesetoffootprintsmadebyapairofsneakers.Notgivingthemmuchthought,shewalkedon. By11a.m.,Baleswasgettingcold.Shedecidedtoreturntohercar.Onherwaydown,sheagainspottedthesneakertracks,whichsuddenlymadeahardleft-handturnoffthetrail.Nowshefeltgenuinelyalarmed.Shewassurethehikerlosthiswayinthelowvisibility.IfBalescontinuedtofollowthetracks,she'daddriskandtimetoherreturn.Butshecouldn'tletthisgo.Sheturnedtotheleftandcalledout,"Hello!"Nothing. Balesfollowedthetracks,roundedaslightcomerandsawamansittingmotionless.Heworetennissneakers,shorts,alightjacketandfingerlessgloves.Hisskinwaspaleandhehadaglazed(呆滞的)lookonhisface."Oh,hello,"Balesapproachedandsaid,"What'syourname?"Themandidn'treact.Obviously,nothingwasconnectingforhimandhewasinreallybigtrouble.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Balesstoppedbeingacuriousandconcernedhiker,andbeganafull-onrescuemission._________. Overthenexthour,themanbegantomoveandspeak._________.
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正确答案:Bales stopped being a curious and concerned hiker, and began a full-on rescue mission. Immediately, she braved the increasingly wild and fierce weather to take off the outer layers of her clothes to cover the motionless man. And then Bales tried to
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本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Bales计划6个小时内独自登雪山,在登山前Bales做了非常详细的准备,可是在登山途中发现了别人的脚印,疑似是有人走丢了,Bales没有独自离开,而是寻着脚印寻找到了一个男人,此时男人已经一动不动。 高分句型一 In a weak voice, he thanked Bales and told her how he lost his way and was trapped here. 翻译:他用微弱的声音向巴尔斯表示感谢,并告诉她他是如何迷路并被困在这里的。 分析:由省略连接词that的宾语从句。 高分句型二 Bales kept warming him up until he signaled he could walk. 翻译:巴尔斯不停地给他热身,直到他发出可以走路的信号。 分析:由until引导时间状语从句。
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解题方法点拨 (1)品读原文。确定文章线索每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。 (2)仔细审题。明确续写要求一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。 (3)回扣原文。揣摩续写思路根据文章后面的要求,再次快速回读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容。 (4)拟写草稿。修改错词病句 在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。 (5)关键用词。标出续写部分中使用到的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语这一点可以帮助考生自己检查关键词的使用情况并根据情况做出修改。最后在誊写文字时,务必做到字迹工整、清晰。